西安东郊雅思写作5.5分班开头段撰写讲解

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西安小寨雅思写作5.5分班,西安小寨雅思写作6.5分班,想要雅思作文拿高分?首当其冲的是什么?当然是一篇文章的开头段喽~

然而很多小考鸭受应试教育的影响,总是希望在文章开头就抓住考官的眼球,拼命用一些我们并不熟悉甚至还一知半解的词汇和句型。然后,当然就没有然后了。

那么,今天,小编就来给大家讲解下,如何写出简单还能拿高分的作文开头~

其实,虽然雅思作文看上去是个不可逾越的大坑,但是只要我们细细分析,常见的提问方式也就不过4类:

1)观点类(opinion essay)

2)讨论类(discussion essay)

3)优劣势类(advantage and disadvantage essay)

4)报告类(report)

每一种提问方式的题目都有自己不同的开头段写作方法。

1、观点类

观察观点类题目的特征,我们不难发现,此类题型的特征是题目有且只有一个观点。

而题目要求我们回答的是“同意”或“不同意”这个观点。所以只要确定好我们的态度,在开头段表达出来即可。

举个栗子:Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health. Do you agree or disagree?

1)agree:根据“背景句+直接转述题目+个人观点”的公式

These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. (背景句) But some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health. (直接转述题目) Personally, I agree with this idea. (个人观点)

2)disagree:用“although”的让步状语从句进行改写

These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. (背景句) Although some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health, (although +直接转述题目) personally, I do not agree with this idea. (个人观点)

2、讨论类

至于讨论类题目,这样的题目会有两个观点,并且题目要求“讨论双方观点”和“给出自己的观点”。

这样的题目中,其实只用在开头段中写出背景句和转述双方观点就好了。至于个人的观点,可以放到personal idea的段落中。

举个栗子:Some people think citizens should be responsible for their own health costs. Others think it is better to have a health care system which provides free health services.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

答法:People in some countries are paying an increasing amount of money for seeing a doctor, even for a minor illness. (背景句) But, still, some people assert that individuals themselves are supposed to pay for such fees. (一方观点) However, other people disagree and suggest that it is the government’s responsibility to undertake the health costs for its citizens. (另一方观点)

3、优劣势类

优劣势的题目,一般而言都会给出一个现象或者是趋势,这又刚好和我们开头段中的“背景句”吻合了,所以在优劣势文章的开头段的时候就没有必要再写背景句了,直接转述题目就可以了。

但是要表达出自己的“优大于劣”或者“劣大于优”的观点,只需要用一句话就搞定了。

举个栗子:Shopping online is replacing shopping in stores. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

答法:These days, it is common to see that people prefer choosing online shopping to shopping in physical stores. Although some problems would occur as this trend continues, I believe such development brings more benefits.

4、报告类

report类最简单,因为通常题目和优劣势文章一样,会给出一个现象或趋势,所以开头段的组成部分就只有改写题目。

举个栗子:In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes.Why is this happening?What are the possible solutions to solve this problem?

答法:These days, it is common to see that the rate of youth crime has been increasing dramatically all over the globe and it is a most worrying issue of modern society.

怎么样?只要按照这个方法来写你的作文开头,分分钟可以给考官留下靠谱滴好印象呢~ 赶快试试吧!


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